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1972 Plymouth Barracuda Graphite
Graphite pencils on 12X18 Fabriano Artistico, 140 LB Hot Press Watercolor Paper, 32 hours

I think i did a pretty good job with this one. My proportions are close, but need to be tightened up some around intricate grill passages. This grill came out okay, but i used to nail passages like this years ago, and this grill is not as clean and crisp as i wanted it to come out.

I decided to pay more attention to the pavement than i usually do because the driver parked it on the stripe in the parking lot, and this stripe showed up on the car in a very interesting pattern. So i wanted to include the stripe and more parking lot than just the shadow. What do you think? Does it work? Does it add or take away from the drawing?

Most of the transitions in the value changes came out well, but i am still not as smooth as i want it to be. The original looks better than this, smoother, but i am still responsible for the presentation of the work. I’m getting better, but i am not there yet.

I am pleased that i was able to get many of the value changes the way i wanted them to look. I am happy with the interior, as i got a good representation of it without distracting from the front end. Not sure i like the license plate that i toned down to keep from being a distraction.

So i still have things to improve on, but if it was easy, then it would not be such a challenge. Nor so rewarding as i get closer to the effects i am trying to achieve.

Here is the reference photograph that i used [link] .

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:iconspasiantasticalman:
wow...I wish I could draw like that...second thoughts, I probably could but it would take me WAYYYYY too long...*looks at the reflections* third thoughts, no I can't draw like this at all hahaha

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:iconwh2007:
My favorite car! :D The picture is really good. I like your hyperrealistic style of drawing cars.

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:iconstorm53:
Thank you! There ain't nothing inside of me that ain't inside of you, too! Anyone can draw like this if they put in the practice time! :wave:
:icondavincipoppalag:
beautifully done=

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:iconstorm53:
Thank you! Your favorite car? That's cool. I never did understand why the 'Cuda did not become more popular. It was the first Pony Car, but the fact that we call them Pony Cars reflects on how popular the Mustang became...even though it debuted a few months after the Barracuda. Public perception is such a fickle thing...i thought Chrysler put out a lot of great cars, but they always seem to lag behind in sales. Thank you for the comment! :wave:
:iconstorm53:
Thank you very much! :wave:
:iconrobertceltimid:
gorgeous

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Welcome

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This is wonderful, I'd like to know, how do you usually start a car drawing freehand? Usually I end up going through 3 or 4 pieces of paper because I either draw it way too large or i end up cutting off one end of it. After learning a bit more about perspective, I'm probably going to start by drawing a rectangle in perspective and work from there.

Also what are you using to blend the tones in? If you're just using blending sticks I'd recommend buying some cotton balls or at least q-tips and working it in layer after layer until you build it up to the desired shade. Either way I think this is a really successful drawing! :)

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Nov 4, 2009, 8:21:39 PM

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